昨日から掲載している「教養国語」の「元気の出る言葉」、今日も掲載します。

今日は日曜なので、学校はお休みです。登校しないでください。
明日は国公立二次・私立大対策講座（有志）7日めです。明日の時間割を掲載します。
1限→（国立）理系生物（E組）・（国立）理系物理（F組）・（私立）英語（G組）・（難関）理系数学（H組）
2限→（国立）理系化学（F組）・（私立）英語（G組）・（難関）理系数学（H組）
3限→（私立）数学（C組）・（難関）二次英語（D組）・（国立）理系数学（E組）・（私立）政経（G組）
4限→（難関）二次英語（D組）・（国立）理系数学（E組）・（私立）政経（G組）・（私立）理系物理（H組）
5限→（難関）理系化学（C組）・（国立）現文個別指導（E組）・（私立）世界史（F組）
6限→（国立）二次英語（E組）・（私立）世界史（F組）
7限→（国立）二次英語（E組）・（難関）理系生物（F組）・（私立）現文個別指導（G組）・（難関）理系物理（H組）

二次対策講習「英作文」で「子供にどんな背中を見せるべきでない」という文に取り組んだところ、さまざまな作文が提出されました。
Parents shouldn’t show their bad behavior to their children.
‘show’というと名詞のショーの意味があるように、わざわざ意識的に見せているようなニュアンスがある一方、behaviorはbe+haveで無意識的に行う行為のニュアンスあり。なので、この２語を一緒に用いると不自然です。ここは：
Parents shouldn’t show bad manners in front of their children
Parents shouldn’t behave poorly when their children are watching　などがおすすめです。
解答例
Parents shouldn’t lie in front of their children. That’s because if they do so, their children would think that the society allows them to do what their parents do.

If the parents do such things as throwing trash in(on) the street and breaking rules, their children regard them as what they can do and will do the same. In addition to this, their grandchildren will do the same by seeing(following) their children.

Parents should not behave as if they were children too, because if they keep on doing so, children cannot grow up. For example, if parents play or talk in a loud voice on the train, what happens to their children? They will play and talk like that too when they grow up.

I think that parents should behave honestly in front of their children.

You should not behave immorally in front of your children. For example, don’t get angry toward strangers for something small. Or you should not talk to the clerks arrogantly.

Parents shouldn’t have their children see them use violence. This is because children often imitate what their parents do. If they see their parents being violent, they come to use violence. Therefore parents should act after thinking deeply about their actions(behavior)…

Children learn by imitating their parents; therefore they take after their parents’ bad habits.

Children always long for their parents and want to be like them.

I think parents should not quarrel in front of their children. That’s because this could affect their children’s growth seriously. An example is a neighbor family in which the parents always quarrel. Their child is known for being violent.

こんな風に、まず書く内容の構成をするのもいいですね！